It’s annoying because the show should just jump from one
scene to the next but instead it’ll cut to a new location and nothing’s happening
yet. And the feel from such a visual choice is that the writers aren’t quite
sure what they want to do and so they’re filling up air time with these
transitionary breathing periods. The writers on The Walking Dead have never been quite certain as to what they’re
doing either in the large scheme of things or in the individual moments, but it’s
in these moments where nothing is happening that it becomes apparent that they
really don’t have a full conception of what they want to do. They’re just
filling up episodic time with this location establishment/dead air time because
they were a few minutes shy on a script’s adaptation to the screen. That’s how
it comes off.
It’s a shame they chose to do this because, The Walking Dead actually on occasion
has stories that are somewhat interesting, on paper at least. The conflicting
feelings over whether to hand over Michonne to the Governor are a clearly stated
problem that has the potential to bring out some interesting thematic questions
and character reactions. Merle’s story arc in this episode also had the
potential to be something incredibly engaging and complex. And they could have
become these fascinating pieces of television to watch, but rather than using
the extra screen time to add a few more scenes to round out the conflicts and
characters, they kill screentime so we get a full hour of television.
Michonne is a cool character; I fanboy up whenever she
wields that samurai sword, but we know next to nothing about her. Yea, she’s
resourceful and she’s handles herself well in a fight, but what exactly makes
Michonne tick? I’m not quite sure. Similarly, Merle’s sudden desire to do the
right thing and go out in a blaze of glory does seem to come slightly out of
nowhere. If the writers wanted to build to this, they could have hinted at it a
few times before hand. All we needed is a couple scenes where Merle talks with
some other characters and we learn more about how he’s tired of being the bad
guy and tired of being looked down upon by everyone, particularly his brother.
The choice between giving up Michonne to the Governor and
allowing her to stay is also a problem never quite developed to its full
potential. It almost feels inevitable that Rick is going to retract his
decision to hand her over, mainly because Rick needs to be the better person in
order for the conflict with Woodbury to work the way the writers have
established it. The conflict between Woodbury could have been more nuanced and
less one sided, but the Governor (as of last episode) has now gone into full-on
villain territory, and so we’re far past a conflict where our opinions and
feelings are divided and complicated. Rick’s decision to call off the “Ricktatorship”
just doesn’t build from a well-established, organic place. Rick’s choosing it
because these are the “good guys” and not because it was something he struggled
with and had an epiphany about.
The first eight episodes of this season had problems but
what made them far superior to nearly everything that came before them was the
level of certainty with which they moved forward the story. There was still
dead air time, but it seemed like the writers had a much clearer vision of what
they wanted to achieve. After the smoke cleared from the mid-season finale, it
became obvious that they didn’t know how to handle the aftermath of the
conflict between the prison and Woodbury. They’ve been stretching out a conflict
that logically would have happened much sooner except for the fact there’s more
episodes of this series that need to be aired.
Stray Observations:
-The car alarm scene is legitimately exciting even if Merle doesn't act to logical in it.
-“That’s a good idea” “It was Michonne's” – I don’t think you
could be any more on the nose.
-“I’ll do whatever he says” – Rick is the leader because
Rick is the leader, and not because he’s necessarily qualified.
-Glen asked Maggie to marry him. So, yea, that happened. He
amusingly steals a ring off the finger of a zombie.
-Norman Reedus's acting is great when Darryl comes across zombie Merle.
-Norman Reedus's acting is great when Darryl comes across zombie Merle.
Grade: B-

Anyone can be bitten at any time without warning. Unless you are the governor, a narratively important bogeyman. In which case you can fight off 30 zombies with a shovel and still abduct someone who is who is essentially safe, were it not for the aforementioned bogeyman.
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