Shows should have some level of cohesion in each episode, no
matter how many plots are thrown at us or how structurally unique it may be. Thus a
show like The Walking Dead gets flack all the time for starting out with opening
scenes that don’t feel like they logically lead us to the end scene of an
episode (no matter how well those individual scenes may be executed).
These plots don’t feel like they should be in one episode
together, or really any episode at all for that matter. The backdoor pilot doesn’t
make sense anymore because Dwight’s escapades on The Farm have been canceled and aren’t happening anymore. And so we
get a storyline that is just plain weird. Dwight goes to take care of his
ailing aunt, who we’ve never heard of before. He brings along Angela, and just
flat out strange, unjustifiable things occur. The scene where he plans to hose
his aunt feels like it’s coming out of a redneck caricature. If Dwight still had
feelings for Angela, it should have been hinted at least a few times before
this.
The most pointless plot of all: Toby’s misplaced affections for Nelly cause him to visit the man incarcerated for the Scranton Strangler murders. Toby goes to the prison and lets the man know that he now believes him to be innocent, despite the fact that his juror vote was “guilty.” And in fitting irony he ends up getting strangled by the man. At least, Nelly gives him a ride home (not that I care).
These subplots were each odder than the next, but we weren’t
there enough for them to become completely grating. On the other hand, the Andy-Erin-Pete plot
that dominated the episode is noticeably all over the place. The real problem is that Andy
has become a plot device and not an actual character. Sure, Andy could be weird
in the past, but the writers kept him just on the right side of crazy. Now
though, he’s descending into a moustache twirling villain intent on nothing but
seeing the pain and destruction of Erin and Pete for hurting him.
The best plot in theory proved to be also very frustrating.
Bob Odenkirk is usually comedic gold, and positioning him as an office manager
who’s one step removed from Michael Scott sounds like one of the most inspired
things the show has done in a long time. But few people apparently can control
and capture the manic energy that made Michael Scott so joyous and oddly
charming like Steve Carrel (even a seasoned comedian like the brilliant Odenkirk
– who isn’t bad, but trapped by predictable and constraining material).
Worse still is that this was an hour long episode that had
little right to be an hour long. Least of all not when this felt like
four different series having their episode’s haphazardly cut together. Duct
taping a number of plots together and hoping the mere charm of a cast will make it work is
not a recipe for success, especially with plots as empty as these.
Any of these plots could have become something. May be not something spectacular but something where they felt like there was a point to them and that they mattered. Modern Family has been doing a good job about this lately. I never really laugh anymore at Modern Family, but I also rarely think to myself, "Oh my God what is that thing?" It's not a form of storytelling that will blow my mind or keep me a devout follower, but it puts a show one step above the mediocrity.
Any of these plots could have become something. May be not something spectacular but something where they felt like there was a point to them and that they mattered. Modern Family has been doing a good job about this lately. I never really laugh anymore at Modern Family, but I also rarely think to myself, "Oh my God what is that thing?" It's not a form of storytelling that will blow my mind or keep me a devout follower, but it puts a show one step above the mediocrity.
Stray Observations:
-Oddly enough the return of one of the series’ worst
characters, Gabe, proves to be one of its best moments. “Yes, thank you for
remembering,” he cheerfully says when Kevin points out that he and Erin used to
“do it”
-Kevin’s miserable failed attempt to introduce himself to
Pete’s ex is hilarious.
-Pam admits she wants to stay in Scranton. We’ve known this
for a while so it’s really not surprising.
Grade: C

I dont really feel as if the plots are empty and i thought it was a good episode.I feel as if the dwight story line was good to show whats going to happen to angela now and i dont really care about erin but it was still a good plot.I dont like how they are making jim and pam fight but its still good to fallow and i dont overall think it was that bad id give it a B+.-Ryry845
ReplyDeleteBut they are kind of empty. What are we gaining from Andy becoming a total unredeemable asshole? Nothing. The show can get away with this with a character like Tod Packer because he pops in every now and again, but it's a bit less justifiable for a main character. Plus Andy's turn for the worse didn't feel at all organic. Andy could be a dick, but it was purposeful and it was drawn from what we knew about him as a character. Here we just get him being villainous to initiate drama. In some instances it works (the conference room scene with Erin and Pete's exes is pretty funny actually), but otherwise this begins to get a little grating. It's mean spirited and lacks purpose.
ReplyDeleteThe Dwight plot particularly felt pointless and needless. The Pete-Erin-Andy stuff we've been dealing with all season. But Dwight's aunt is completely contrived and comes out of nowhere. Why do we need to follow Dwight off doing this? We really don't. We don't learn anything about him, and much of what happens is just too incredibly bizarre to work.
These stories just became annoying and frustrating, and didn't deserve an hours worth of screentime. It felt like they planned a half-hour episode than learned they needed to do a full hour and so put back footage that was best left on the cutting room floor.
I care about Erin more than most characters. It's a character the writers have consistently used and used well, and they've never lost sight of who she is. Plus Ellie Kemper is great in that role and totally sells everything she does.